¿Qué les parece la letra de esta canción?

La otra vez estaba emocionado porque había visto una película de un boxeador muy famoso y me dieron ganas de escribir una canción sobre eso. Esto es lo que escribí, por cierto, está en inglés:

Risin' up back on the street
Did my time, took my chances
Went the distance
now I'm back on my feet
Just a man and his will to survive

So many times,
it happens too fast
You trade your passion for glory
Don't lose your grip on the dreams of the past
[b]You must fight just to keep them alive[/b]

It's the eye of the 



It's the thrill of the fight
Rising up to the challenge of our rival
And the last known survivor
Stalks his prey in the night
And he's watching us all
with the eye of the



Face to face, out in the heat
Hangin' tough, stayin' hungry
They stack the odds
until we take to the street
For we kill with the skill to survive

It's the eye of the 

It's the thrill of the fight
Rising up to the challenge of our rival
And the last known survivor
Stalks his prey in the night
And he's watching us all
with the eye of the 



Ojalá les haya gustado, hasta luego.